tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post8395257718172265653..comments2023-04-28T02:51:16.589-06:00Comments on Teaching from Behind: SOLSC March 4 - SnowflakesAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10998735316905096776noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post-31098709375967852812015-03-04T21:36:52.455-07:002015-03-04T21:36:52.455-07:00It rarely snows where I live, so I too am mesmeriz...It rarely snows where I live, so I too am mesmerized by those beautiful frozen fractals! It is always wonderful to watch how snow has the ability to bring out the long quieted childlike wonder of adults!Jewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04129316544432168089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post-39010571238981105542015-03-04T19:57:24.368-07:002015-03-04T19:57:24.368-07:00I like how you used the colors red and green. The ...I like how you used the colors red and green. The last line is perfect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post-7135364473736565432015-03-04T15:43:36.761-07:002015-03-04T15:43:36.761-07:00We learn that time is not frozen Max, We learn abo...We learn that time is not frozen Max, We learn about the exquisite beauty of snowflakes. We learn about impatience. I love the alliterative quality of your poem. I love the use of colour. The world needs its poets to each play a part, In this piece you demonstrates your willingness to participate. Thanks for sharing your poetry. Alan j Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06077195459186935005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post-13348732743639251002015-03-04T09:35:04.322-07:002015-03-04T09:35:04.322-07:00These frozen fractals are getting on my nerves the...These frozen fractals are getting on my nerves these days, as we have had more of them than we can really expected to deal with. That said, I do love your poem, Max. Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13626451110946889157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post-16939341038682734622015-03-04T03:31:26.178-07:002015-03-04T03:31:26.178-07:00I love that last line. "Traffic has no patien...I love that last line. "Traffic has no patience for unique perfection." A perfect line. Carolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post-2908695394280492482015-03-04T03:08:23.294-07:002015-03-04T03:08:23.294-07:00I like the flow of these lines:
The minuscule per...I like the flow of these lines:<br /><br />The minuscule perfection of<br />Each frozen fractal<br /><br />-KevinDogtraxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16079631702744063837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8238612514264591228.post-56405280742932976242015-03-03T22:18:21.990-07:002015-03-03T22:18:21.990-07:00Love that red & green, Max, and capturing the ...Love that red & green, Max, and capturing the time is nice, too. The picture is awesome!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com